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Post Willow O' Wisp requests feedback
Here's the *final model without texture of the willow i've been working on. Any comments/concerns before i start texturing? I know feathers said something about making it asymmetrical, but I can do that mostly with the texture, and maybe a bit of scaling of the "scale" parts after the fact for a little distortion. All comments/criticisms/questions are encouraged.

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Post Re: Willow O' Wisp requests feedback
Looks epic but the front spikes seem a bit too long, you could fix this by either shrinking the spikes a bit or adding in another 2 'secondary' spikes at the front that sorta point to the sides a bit more and aren't as long. Also feels very front heavy, you need a couple of spikes at the back perturbing a bit more as well.

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Fri May 04, 2012 7:57 pm
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Here's a small shortening of the spikes, i think it looks much more proportional.

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Post Re: Willow O' Wisp requests feedback
That one looks good wanna UV map it and i'll texture it up something nice ;)

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Sat May 05, 2012 12:50 am
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Post Re: Willow O' Wisp requests feedback
*Added DL link for .obj and UV Map.

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Post Re: Willow O' Wisp requests feedback
Textured and orientated so it faces fowards ingame. Also smoothed a few lines to make it fit better with the texture (Sorry biggee but yo barely notice it anyway)
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New .obj file: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/60130296/Willowfile.obj


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Post Re: Willow O' Wisp requests feedback
Nice work guys, I will probably do some minor edits to give it some asymmetry and a glow. I think this is ready to see use in the game though.

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Sun May 06, 2012 1:51 pm
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Post Re: Willow O' Wisp requests feedback
Should have made the "tail" part the same texture as the middle section, since that's all one piece.

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Didn't notice they were together when I textured it.

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Post Re: Willow O' Wisp requests feedback
Bump, will this be added next patch?..

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